Pushy MLs that are on the FL's daddy's side are so skeevy, something about the trope creeps me out. Y'all aren't even going out yet, pls leave her dad out of it.
"Have you visited Africa" it's not Europe my dude, you have to specify which country you're talking about, there are at least 54. I hate when HQs mention any non-white country, the caucasity jumps out.
The fiancé must have acted like he did on the yacht elsewhere, that can't be the first time he blew her off to cozy up to rich ppl.
Wait, she moved to England? Why don't the MLs ever move to FL's country, why is she the one relocating? Fine, she quit her job and can move, but it's the principle of the thing.
Was she the billionaire in this story? She should have been, that'd be cool. It was alright for an HQ, aside from the weird beginning (and middle) moments.